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  • The Big Smoke story: Happiness Is An Option: Chapter 2

  • By Stephen Emms

  • The second part of our weekly serialised story by Stephen Emms.

    A wonderful fact to reflect upon, Marianne Templeton considered as she jumped out of bed, was that every human being was really a mystery to every other.

    In the bathroom, she began with some dry body brushing to slough away the dead skin cells. She had only been in London two weeks but the dirt! Dalston was a far cry from Deal beach. Feature continues

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    She considered happiness as she stepped into the cubicle. It floats, she decided. It will float down to you in ways you never expect. The power shower seemed to endorse her theory. She felt happier than she had for a long time. She washed her hair, massaged conditioner in, and used an exfoliating scrub. She shaved under her arms every day, unable to understand women who grew their body hair. In the sink, she washed her face and neck with a gentle exfoliant.

    You are happy either way.

    Her gran’s phrase: as satisfying as moisturiser. Peering closely at the mirror, her face flushed but healthy, she smoothed in eye cream, being careful to pat it in around her eyes so she didn't drag the skin.

    Let the day grow on you, up through your feet.

    She smiled. Would someone have taken her notebook? She feared so, but it was worth a trip back to the Heath. How silly she’d been, sitting on the bench, admiring the view – Mum was right, the best in London – and, in a breezy moment, forgetting it.
    She dressed – skinny jeans, a vest and Converse today, Sunday – and blow-dried her hair in the bedroom, before returning to the bathroom to do her makeup: foundation, under-eye concealer, brush-on translucent powder. A splash of blusher across the cheekbones. London was an inhospitable place – terrifying and stimulating – so wasn’t the way to conquer it to practice kindness? A lost art, she thought, applying mascara on top and bottom lashes, careful to reach even the little lashes at the inner corners.

    Yes, people could communicate better in the capital, she was sure of it, like they did along the promenade in Deal, where she said hello to everyone, whether she knew them or not.

    She enjoyed a good spritz of perfume, more generous than usual to match her mindset: on her navel, cleavage, as well as neck and wrists. Then she sprayed some into the air and walked into it so the scent would drift into her hair.

    So, would the notebook still be there? It didn’t matter really, but she’d catch the overground train to the Heath anyway. Putting on her rings and bracelet, she opened the front door, blue sky peeping out between the clouds, to a world blossoming with opportunity.

    For chapter 3, click here.

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10 comments

  1. Posted by Fi on 15 Oct 2009 16:01

    Completely hooked from the first episode. This gets forwarded to my entire address book every week!

  2. Posted by Tom on 15 Oct 2009 09:34

    Nice writing. I love this.

  3. Posted by Archie on 12 Oct 2009 14:13

    My Mummy reads your story out to me every week - it is my favourite

  4. Posted by russell on 10 Oct 2009 23:48

    I LOVE this, hawling myself out of bed in the morning, I struggle to awake, reform my face or who I'm going to today. I feel blank until I start my morning regime.'Her gran’s phrase: as satisfying as moisturiser' I think the place I find myself in will be, luckily right now, happy either way!

  5. Posted by debbs on 10 Oct 2009 23:17

    I so wish I had written about open mouthed vans and wandernig onions. Crispy, concise and relevant = oh I so wish I could have written this.

  6. Posted by Charlotte on 10 Oct 2009 14:13

    oooh, what's going to happen? love the way it's unfolding - i know what I'm hoping will happen - fingers crossed! Jumped ahead to chapter 3, obviously. can't wait for the next one.

  7. Posted by kate on 10 Oct 2009 13:18

    Already gripped and love that I can relate to the places and lives of the main characters. Do I really have to wait another week for the next chapter? I just want to rip through it.

  8. Posted by Stephen Emms on 10 Oct 2009 08:08

    Thanks people....keep reading it and tell your friends!

  9. Posted by Dora on 10 Oct 2009 08:06

    i adore this story. a great slice of london life. i want to be marianne!

  10. Posted by Louise Perry on 09 Oct 2009 17:45

    This is truly wonderful storytelling, I'm totally hooked! It's really well crafted and (without wishing to sound too simplistic but I know I will) just has a really nice feel to it - it makes me happy - I'm choosing that option....

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