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  • Last week, Richard Sharp continued our London chain story. Here is the ninth chapter, written by Time Out reader Howard Dorman. Thanks to everyone who contributed.

    Chapter Nine by Howard Dorman

    Mo and Tobias sat silently in the taxi as it slowly made its way along Peckham Road. She was growing desperate, and for a second she could see only wild-looking geese in her mind’s eye. But her imagination wouldn’t let her off that easily, and Betsy was soon back in her thoughts – along with grim images of what Franz might be doing to her.

    Mo knew that scouring the internet would be fuck-all use. F Schmidts everywhere. Hundreds of them in Berlin and dozens of them in London, everywhere from Bermondsey to Barking. So she found herself clutching at straws and heading towards the badlands of Brockley with a man she knew only carnally. Fritz had once mentioned a cousin who lived south of the river. Deep from the recesses of her mind, she conjured up Drake Road and dragged Tobias with her to the minicab office. Feature continues

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    South London reminded her of parts of east Berlin. Nice new buildings at regular intervals but always the feeling that the good life was tantalisingly elsewhere, just across the other side of a river or a long-gone wall that she had never seen. As the taxi trundled along New Cross Road behind the usual procession of Number 36 buses, Mo remembered the last time she had seen Betsy, the sister who always seemed to be the chosen one. It was ten months ago and Betsy seemed preoccupied with growing up. Lamb dressed as mutton. Mo feared for her, but knew she was wasting her words as she told her to look after herself.

    ‘Look who’s talking,’ Betsy had spat back. ‘Did you ever find that guy who legged it after you paid him £10,000 for a shag?’


    Mo had stormed out of the café on the King’s Road there and then – it was something of a family tradition that you never left each other on speaking terms. She didn’t want to admit it, but in the midst of her dread for her sister’s well-being she found herself being nagged by something approaching jealousy. Fritz was scum, but he was good-looking scum.

    Tobias shook her from her reverie as they turned off Lewisham Road into Tyrwhitt Road. ‘Did they name this place after Cubby?’ he asked, presumably to lighten the mood. Mo wondered why some men don’t come branded with ‘fuckwit’ across their foreheads.

    The driver took the third right into Drake Road and stopped. Mo and Tobias got out and started at Number 1. No reply.

    As they walked along the path to Number 2, Mo looked up at a first-floor window and saw a face that looked vaguely familiar. ‘God, he looks rough. You’d think he’d just shagged a geriatric prossie,’ blurted Tobias as the man stumbled down the stairs to open the door.


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10 comments

  1. Posted by Zahid on 13 Jun 2007 06:49

    Judging from the responses, it seems all are writers wanting to take a stab at writing the next installment. Eventhough we are now on the 13th installment, most of these responses happen to be for the first, a bit misleading in a way until you read carefully.

  2. Posted by Janine Stephenson on 27 Apr 2007 10:30

    I'm confused - the title is "A London Story" but what's being published bears little or no relation to it. Babygirl appears to have been spirited AWAY from London; the frequent flashbacks to Germany are quite simply bizarre; thank god Howard Dorman has paid attention to the title!! This story is utterly depressing.

  3. Posted by Ron Tipple on 07 Mar 2007 14:25

    I think the best way to trace Franz would be to place a sheet of translucent paper over an old photograph of him and then carefully sketch his outline with a soft pencil, adding as much detail and colour for realism as possible.

  4. Posted by LM on 05 Mar 2007 09:20

    It's no doubt that the piece is well written and would be a good read, but it's a genre. Toby did what he does -write well and about something he has a story in his head about. But if the TimeOut people wanted a large participation then it would have been better to start us off at a path with many possible paths.

  5. Posted by Long way from home on 05 Mar 2007 03:09

    Hmmm, nice idea, shame the first chapter is less than inspirational.

  6. Posted by Jack D on 03 Mar 2007 14:22

    Really fun idea, but agreed the beginning doesnt leave a lot to work with at all. I guess the next chapter will really set the tone in stone. Also a deadline wld be nice for submissions (!)

  7. Posted by steev burgess on 03 Mar 2007 13:18

    Sorry to change the subject chaps,but I've just noticed that the capricious gods of the Time Out books section have once again ignored our prayers for the listing of our poetry club which they insist is finished. NO !
    Y Tuesday poetry club, Tuesday 6th March 2007, 8pm, 3 Kings pub, Clerkenwell close EC1
    London's cosy, candle lit club with a cat, 1 year old and going strong. Still a whopping FREE to get in.

  8. Posted by Em on 02 Mar 2007 22:50

    Great idea, but a deadline when entries have to be in by each week would be useful. I couldn't see on in the mag or on the site.

  9. Posted by LMB on 02 Mar 2007 14:29

    Great Idea!! This would have been great fun, just wonder why you had to start us off so somberly with negativity looming in the future. It leaves us very little versatility. Hope you give us the chance again and start us off with a little lighter feeling and a chance for a diverse plot. I'll be looking forward to it.

  10. Posted by Will Rankin on 02 Mar 2007 14:15

    Nice start Toby, rich with promise and all sorts of potential. It's inspired me to attempt an entry, but I'm a bit rubbish at fiction. Looking forward to the next episode folks.

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